The perfect Three – Father, Son, Spirit
shining brightly in her soul
together, molding her broken heart
into a perfect whole
her own mind, body, spirit
obedient to the Father’s will
now being done
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This week’s Trifextra challenge is to write 33 words using the Rule of Three somewhere among them. It will be community judges – so if you’re reading and you like, please head on over and click my link. (as soon as the voting boxes show up, of course.)
The first Trifecta three on the Trinity. Very well done, even for this poet who doesn’t believe in it! THe point is, you have put forth not only your faith, but your intention to DO something with it, and that’s wonderful and absolutely in line with Jesus’ teachings. Amen!! Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/09/14/black-sheep-a-tale-of-three-sisters/
Supplicant. Perfect title. Love this.
Lovely!
Beautiful
Very pretty words. 😀
Beautifully written!
This is nice – you’ve got the Trinity AND the Mind/Body/Spirit three as well!
very nice. Very YOU
This is beautiful – I really like what you wrote here 🙂
Simply exquisite.
simply beautiful