Supplicant
The perfect Three – Father, Son, Spirit
shining brightly in her soul
together, molding her broken heart
into a perfect whole
her own mind, body, spirit
obedient to the Father’s will
now being done
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This week’s Trifextra challenge is to write 33 words using the Rule of Three somewhere among them. It will be community judges – so if you’re reading and you like, please head on over and click my link. (as soon as the voting boxes show up, of course.)
Posted: September 14th, 2012 under inspiration, Moose Nuggets, poetry, praises, trifecta, words.
Comments: 11
Comments
Comment from Debbie
Time: September 14, 2012, 8:56 pm
Supplicant. Perfect title. Love this.
Comment from FKC
Time: September 14, 2012, 10:26 pm
Lovely!
Comment from Ruby Manchanda
Time: September 15, 2012, 7:11 am
Beautiful
Comment from LInda Vernon
Time: September 15, 2012, 11:02 am
Very pretty words. 
Comment from Lumdog
Time: September 15, 2012, 11:33 am
Beautifully written!
Comment from Libby
Time: September 15, 2012, 4:32 pm
This is nice – you’ve got the Trinity AND the Mind/Body/Spirit three as well!
Comment from vew
Time: September 15, 2012, 5:53 pm
very nice. Very YOU
Comment from JannaT
Time: September 15, 2012, 9:19 pm
This is beautiful – I really like what you wrote here 
Comment from Jeanna
Time: September 16, 2012, 8:42 am
Simply exquisite.
Comment from deana
Time: September 16, 2012, 8:57 am
simply beautiful
Comment from Sharp Little Pencil
Time: September 14, 2012, 4:26 pm
The first Trifecta three on the Trinity. Very well done, even for this poet who doesn’t believe in it! THe point is, you have put forth not only your faith, but your intention to DO something with it, and that’s wonderful and absolutely in line with Jesus’ teachings. Amen!! Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/09/14/black-sheep-a-tale-of-three-sisters/