I stand
At the edge of the water
Ring of flowers drifting
My aloha to you
Ending this stage of our
Lives
I will always love you
Miss you forever
My only love
Photo from photo bucket
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written for the trifextra weekend challenge . . . use their three words (ring, water, stage) and add 30 more for a perfect trifecta of 33 words. These are mine . . . where are yours?
romance never gets old. Enjoyed.
Barbara, you always have such good posts. Love reading your works!!
Very well written. Beautiful, sad, poignant.
I love Hawaii. So many beautiful words and ways of doing things. Great 33 words:)
Excellent.
Beautiful!
Aww… this made me sad, but in a good way. A lovely goodbye.
This is beautiful. I found my mind flowing the imagery of your words…
So emotionally heavy. The image of the flowers is particularly poignant. Beautifully done!
I loved this Barbara. I could see it and feel it. 😀
Beautifully done! Love the use of aloha.
Wow, that was beautifully written!!
Wow. This is lovely. You touched a nerve with me.
This is beautiful. I love Hawaii 🙂
Love forever … what else ! So sweet !
Poignant. I enjoyed it. Marie.
I love LaTonya’s comment. And I totally agree. Thanks for linking up, Barbara.
So good Barbara. Very touching.
This made me ache for her. So lovely. Thank you for linking up!
This was pure love. It reminded me of a song by Natalie Merchant “Beloved Wife” I hope you will look it up and give it a listen….