Charts and optimal dates and preferential temperatures. One line or two. As if she could summon whatever it is that makes up the human soul as easily as she could a cab on a busy New York avenue.

She and Mike had been together 6 years. They’d spent three glorious years of young love and infatuation with all things “couple”.

It was the coupling that was mechanical now. The past three years had seen highs and lows and way too much cotton padding.

Tessa wiped, opened the door, and walked into Mike’s arms, hungry for a touch that wasn’t scheduled or intended.

Looking up, she gave away nothing, instead she simply tilted her chin.

When his mouth found hers, she melted against her husband. Furiously working to release the buttons, Tessa slipped the shirt from his shoulders and pushed him onto the bed.

Mike moaned with false hope. Smiling she sank down into the betrayal with a passion she hadn’t felt for him in years.

The letting go was easier than she anticipated; as easy as flushing the blood and dreams away had been.

“Honey?” she whispered, “I’m leaving you.”

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Edited to add: the italicized portion is Kirsten’s addition/conclusion to the story. Both Hubbymoose and I gave it the PurpleMoose seal of approval with a clap of the hands and loud guffaws. Serves Mike right, we think.
🙂 Thanks, Kirsten – much fun writing with you. And many thanks to Velvet Verbosity for co-hosting the prompt contest.
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The first 38 words of this piece were written by (now) Trifecta editor Joules who won that week’s challenge. Present day – an anniversary challenge from Trifecta’s editors is to pair up two trifectans to continue the story. I have completed the first part and now turn it over to Kirsten of Kir’s Corner. She is madly typing even as I post this. Watch for the next part soon..

Whee!

14 responses

  1. Draug says:

    o__o What’s gonna happen next??? The waiting is the hard part. This challenge is both intriguing and frustrating! lol

  2. Kirsten says:

    it’s just dumb luck that I have so much experience with this kind of thing. 😉

    but thankfully, I’m thinking that the way to finish this is…..
    (hahah) like I was going to tell. NO WAY.

    it was awesome to write with you Barbara, I loved every second.

  3. Lumdog says:

    Well, this was a surprising take. I can sympathize having been married a good many years (that problem solved now), but it’s still depressing. I can only hope, with Kir’s optimism, this will have a happy ending.

  4. Gina says:

    I can’t imagine the frustration or the stress or the longing. I know it’s tough on couples. I’m hopeful here too! Kir…tag your it!

  5. Tara R. says:

    This challenge is going to be great fun. I can’t wait to see where Kir goes with your lead-in. Nicely done.

  6. nrhatch says:

    Fingers crossed for a happy ending. 😀

  7. Nice play on couple and coupling. But that cotton padding! *shiver*

  8. JannaT says:

    And now I want to know if the embrace is to comfort her sadness or share her joy. (I hope it’s joy :))

  9. vew says:

    Good take on the prompt. You’ve given her a lot to live up to. Great as always

  10. Mel says:

    I hope that he gave her a huge hug for some happy news!

  11. deana says:

    I really like this! Cant wait to read whats next.

  12. Rachael says:

    Great story! I really like what you wrote, and while Kirsten’s ending was surprising, I enjoyed it as well.

  13. Wow. Didn’t see that coming … at all. What’s next?

  14. Trifecta says:

    Oh. . .mechanical coupling. That’s never a good thing, is it? 🙂 Thanks so much for linking up, Barbara, and helping us to celebrate our anniversary.

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