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Ah tole you! We done missed the bus cause you doin that shuffle ‘long two step. Dad burned younguns! Lissasue! Stand up straight, now y’hear? Ima sit raht here and rest mah dogs.
Written for the trifextra challenge – 33 words using the above picture as the launch point. These are mine – where are yours?

14 responses

  1. Haha! What can I say? The dialogue was perfect!

  2. Tara R. says:

    I suspect Mama will jerk a knot in Lissasue’s noggin’ iffin’ she don’t do as she’s told.

    Fun dialogue!

  3. Joe says:

    If momma ain’t happy . . .

  4. LaTonya says:

    ((smile)) Like the direction you took here.

  5. I want to read more. Like what you did with the prompt.

  6. JannaTWrites says:

    I love the dialogue!

  7. Cobbie's World says:

    The tongue-lashing perfectly suits the posture of the shadows. Good interpretation, Barbara. 🙂

  8. I loved that you managed the entire 33 in dialogue. Nicely done.

  9. Suzanne says:

    Awesome! Love the dialect, love the character’s voice. Well done Barbara!

  10. Valerie says:

    Well done! Reminds me of a sweltering southern summer day. Your dialog is spot on!

  11. Tess Kann says:

    Oh yes. . . perfect lingo

  12. Tess Kann says:

    The lingo is perfect…

  13. Tess Kann says:

    Perfect dialogue…

  14. Donetta says:

    This is very well written and love the dialog. I nominated you for The Leibster Blog Award, if you want to visit my blog. 🙂

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