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One last mirror check. Hair: perfectly coiffed. Makeup: no blotches, no coloring outside the lines on lips or eyes. Cheryl dabbed at an invisible (to all but Cheryl) blotch on the lipstick.

Stepping back from the vanity, another check of the outfit so painstakingly chosen for this debut. The gown was robin’s egg blue with swaths of sequins and pearls. The back proffered an alluring split to the thigh. The front low enough for cleavage to peek through enticingly.

Gems sparkled from Cheryl’s ears and throat and rings adorned fingers red-tipped with polish.

At the bottom of seamed, silk encased legs . . . sparkling silver pumps – size 10E.

The stage manager hurried to Cheryl’s side, trying to hurry things along. “It’s time, Max, come on.”

“There is no Max here, you dolt. Only Cheryl. Cheryl will come when Cheryl is ready.”

“Well, CHERYL had best get ready soon, or I’m going to the next act. Just because this is your first time, honey, that don’t mean the crowd won’t get restless and boo you off the stage. Now, you coming or not?”

A flip, a twirl, and a sigh preceded Cheryl’s walk onto the stage. There were no boos that night. Cheryl entranced the crowd and loved every minute of it.
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This is dedicated to those in my family who walk the walk as they talk the talk. More power to you!

The trifecta challenge this week is TIME used in the third definition:

1a : the measured or measurable period during which an action, process, or condition exists or continues : duration
b : a nonspatial continuum that is measured in terms of events which succeed one another from past through present to future
c : leisure [time for reading]
2: the point or period when something occurs : occasion
3a : an appointed, fixed, or customary moment or hour for something to happen, begin, or end [arrived ahead of time]
b : an opportune or suitable moment —often used in the phrase about time [about time for a change]

16 responses

  1. Sandra Crook says:

    Nice one! Good for Cheryl. And Max.

  2. deana says:

    How great!

  3. Annabelle says:

    I love how the change in persona includes the use of the third person! Fun read.

  4. Lumdog says:

    I sense this is not entirely fiction. Love to hear the back story! 😉

  5. JannaTWrites says:

    At first, I was thinking this was a beauty pageant. Of course, by the end I knew that wasn’t the case. Nice job with this scene!

  6. Hello —

    I hereby nominate this blog for the Liebster Award!

    Whether to accept or not is your call. I hope you do.

    Details in this post: http://uttleystake.com/2013/03/14/the-liebster/

    Cheers,
    Uttley

  7. Rambly says:

    A case of stand tall and be proud of who you are WAY TO GO CHERYL! (Max)

  8. Tara R. says:

    Loved it! Go Cheryl go!

  9. Draug says:

    Yeah! Go Cheryl! 😀

  10. Bjorn says:

    Love Cheryl, and for me the twist came at size 10E… don’t know ladies sizes ecept it’s fairly large

  11. Very nice! I like the reveal by means of the shoes and your character’s spunk… not quite a diva yet, but I am sure s/he will get there!

    🙂

  12. steph says:

    I did a double-take at 10E – and then the reveal at the end. Good for Cheryl!

  13. Christine says:

    Awesome! Talk about power and self-confidence. Great subject, and great description.

  14. Size 10 E pumps. I could use those! Go Cheryl.

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