It was
The day after
Kingdom
Come
The mists
Cleared
We raised
Stretched
Our hands
To the sky
Stooped
slowly
To the
Ground
We sought
What was
Lost
Wondered
If we
Were found
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The Trifecta weekend challenge was to write 33 words with the above picture as the catalyst. These are mine . . . where are yours?
Well done, it is amazing how we can all see something different in the picture. I hope they found what they wanted.
This reads very beautifully and biblically, too. I love the very economical and efficient way in which you used each word. Very well done, Barbara.
I’m not sure if we want to be ‘found’ are we?
Like it. 🙂
I like this a lot. Not what I see in the photo, which is what makes it so cool.
This was so beautiful that I teared up. It touched my heart with its simplicity. Bravo!
flows so well – very nice answer to the prompt!
Beautiful take… I really like this 🙂
I was reminded of Amazing Grace. I like this take on the image. Beautifully written.
I like the eerie tone to this. I wonder if they were found too…
Yes! Yes! We were found! Wonderful that you came out with such a positive story from a picture that is full of contrasts.
I love where you went with this. Brilliant idea. Your words are really moving.
Barb, this. is. AMAZING!
Beautiful! Very well written and very interesting idea.
Great ideas in this – I like the stretching and stooping, trying to get used to the new surroundings.
I like the reference to Amazing Grace – not sure if it was intentional, but it definitely added another layer. Nicely done!
Love the spiritual & enlightening texture of this beautiful piece Barbara:-)
Beautifully written Barbara! Love the structure and the pace.
This took my breath… absolutely stunning.
Love that this is the day After kingdom come! The lost & found department. Lovely poem.
Barbara – I thought the Biblical entrance to this was interesting, beautiful succinct wording brought it home.
excellent piece. i like the interpretation you had. well done.
I loved this Barb 🙂 WE had the same idea almost …