Bless me, father. YOU have sinned.
My child, begin again. “I†have sinned.
That’s what I said, father. YOU have sinned.
“Iâ€, child. “I†have sinned.
Indeed, father. And now, you’re under arrest.
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Answering the weekend trifecta challenge: confession. Do go over and check out the new Featured trifectan.
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Loved that last line!
Your 33 words spoke volumes about a subject many still want to sweep under the carpet.
Awsome! 🙂
Cool ending! Nicely done!
Hahaha! This is good. I’m sure there are good priests out there, but there are others that muddy the whole bunch.
No more hiding his sins! Good one!
Ah! Haha! Loved this! I did have visions of the old “Who’s on Second” Abbott and Costello skit.
It took me a second read, but I see the comedy. Very clever.
got him – good job
Cogent piece.
Nicely played
oh man that’s priceless
Sadly precise. Excellent, my dear.
Well done!
Hah! Good one!
Lovely dialogue and denouement. Very clever
that is awesome!
I can’t stop laughing.
it would be a better world if we could clear out all the ghastly priestly sins as well as the law-breaking officers performing the arrests — everyone prefers to be on the side of the judgments, however. good turn.
haha, well played.
Kudos for tackling a touchy subject and doing so with comedy.
Kids don’t mess around. Love the justice in this.
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Cleverly done.
This prompt spokes volume. Great one!
Great take.
I do think indeed that I might unknowingly have written the prequel to this…
Good story.
That’s quite certain.. nicely done.
I can hear this echoing around the world!
funny … gud job ! 🙂
This gets one of my three votes this week. Keep up the good work!