Pleasure
She rushed into the room bringing the outdoors chill with her. Shrugging off coat, boots, hat and mittens, she cast her eyes around in pleasure. Ah, home at last!
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Trifextra Week 2 Challenge: Write a complete story in three sentences only. Whew! This, however, is how I feel when I come home from work.
And, now I am off to read the other submissions. Won’t you give it a shot this week?
Posted: February 3rd, 2012 under Moose Nuggets, trifecta.
Comments: 13
Comments
Comment from kelly garriott waite
Time: February 3, 2012, 6:48 pm
I love when we bring winter inside, if only for a minute. You can feel it. You can smell it. Nicely done.
Comment from Dana
Time: February 3, 2012, 8:07 pm
Brrr! I swear I felt the chill as you entered your warm & comfy home. Love this!
Comment from Jessie Powell
Time: February 3, 2012, 10:02 pm
That captures the end of the day marvelously.
Comment from Trifecta
Time: February 4, 2012, 12:34 pm
Thanks for joining up again. I’ve been living in Abu Dhabi for 14 years and I’d forgotten just how nice it is to come in out of the cold. I really enjoyed this. Hope we’ll see you again for the weekday challenge.
Comment from The Mommy Patient
Time: February 4, 2012, 2:02 pm
I like the simplicity of this.
Comment from Carrie
Time: February 4, 2012, 2:57 pm
I would feel this way…if I wasn’t immediately tackled by crazy kids 
Comment from Gina
Time: February 5, 2012, 8:08 am
Loved this and just how I feel about my home.
Comment from Satu Gustafson
Time: February 5, 2012, 10:04 am
This reminds me of our Christmas holidays. I loved that feeling. It was fun outside with the snow and all but coming home afterwards just felt great (and knowing there’d be a cup of hot chocolate waiting).
Comment from MOV
Time: February 5, 2012, 11:24 am
this story makes you feel warm. good job!
best,
MOV
Comment from Frelle
Time: February 5, 2012, 2:55 pm
great visual and description! suddenly there;s a draft in my room!
Comment from C.B.
Time: February 5, 2012, 2:59 pm
I remember those days!
Comment from booguloo
Time: February 3, 2012, 5:29 pm
Like the first sentence.