She rushed into the room bringing the outdoors chill with her. Shrugging off coat, boots, hat and mittens, she cast her eyes around in pleasure. Ah, home at last!
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Trifextra Week 2 Challenge: Write a complete story in three sentences only. Whew! This, however, is how I feel when I come home from work.
And, now I am off to read the other submissions. Won’t you give it a shot this week?
Like the first sentence.
I love when we bring winter inside, if only for a minute. You can feel it. You can smell it. Nicely done.
Brrr! I swear I felt the chill as you entered your warm & comfy home. Love this!
Nice sensory image here.
Pamela
That captures the end of the day marvelously.
Thanks for joining up again. I’ve been living in Abu Dhabi for 14 years and I’d forgotten just how nice it is to come in out of the cold. I really enjoyed this. Hope we’ll see you again for the weekday challenge.
I like the simplicity of this.
I would feel this way…if I wasn’t immediately tackled by crazy kids 🙂
Loved this and just how I feel about my home.
This reminds me of our Christmas holidays. I loved that feeling. It was fun outside with the snow and all but coming home afterwards just felt great (and knowing there’d be a cup of hot chocolate waiting). 🙂
this story makes you feel warm. good job! 🙂
best,
MOV
great visual and description! suddenly there;s a draft in my room!
I remember those days!