She rushed into the room bringing the outdoors chill with her. Shrugging off coat, boots, hat and mittens, she cast her eyes around in pleasure. Ah, home at last!

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Trifextra Week 2 Challenge: Write a complete story in three sentences only. Whew! This, however, is how I feel when I come home from work.

And, now I am off to read the other submissions. Won’t you give it a shot this week?

13 responses

  1. booguloo says:

    Like the first sentence.

  2. I love when we bring winter inside, if only for a minute. You can feel it. You can smell it. Nicely done.

  3. Dana says:

    Brrr! I swear I felt the chill as you entered your warm & comfy home. Love this!

  4. pamelasayers says:

    Nice sensory image here.

    Pamela

  5. That captures the end of the day marvelously.

  6. Trifecta says:

    Thanks for joining up again. I’ve been living in Abu Dhabi for 14 years and I’d forgotten just how nice it is to come in out of the cold. I really enjoyed this. Hope we’ll see you again for the weekday challenge.

  7. I like the simplicity of this.

  8. Carrie says:

    I would feel this way…if I wasn’t immediately tackled by crazy kids 🙂

  9. Gina says:

    Loved this and just how I feel about my home.

  10. This reminds me of our Christmas holidays. I loved that feeling. It was fun outside with the snow and all but coming home afterwards just felt great (and knowing there’d be a cup of hot chocolate waiting). 🙂

  11. MOV says:

    this story makes you feel warm. good job! 🙂

    best,
    MOV

  12. Frelle says:

    great visual and description! suddenly there;s a draft in my room!

  13. C.B. says:

    I remember those days!

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